A few emails with Kylie Brant and I can already feel my writing getting stronger :)
I need to digest what she told me and then put it to good use. She said it was okay for me post her advice here. I'll be doing that in the next few days.
She mentions on her website that there might be future mentoring chances available, so for anyone who wants a superBoost on their writing, consider entering. Kylie's Contest
Best. Writing. Experience. Ever.